Help Me With My Book?

Comment:

I have started writing a book but am having trouble with the details.  Could I send it to you for help in using details?

Phyllis replied:

I’m sorry that I can’t read or edit or help revise other people’s manuscripts.  I get many requests to do this, but I would have no time to write my own books if I did.  Using the right amount of detail in a book is the writer’s own responsibility, and something that beginning writers need to practice doing on their own.  So I wish you good  luck with your book.  The more you read and see  how other authors do things, the better your own writing will be.